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Peer Revision


My peers were all equally uninformed on my topic of colorism. They were honestly surprised by some of the facts that supported my thesis. They all agreed that I had an adequate amount of supporting details as well as variety in my sources. Some mentioned that a few of my quotes and supporting details may be too long to cite. I didn’t cite the Webster dictionary correctly. I also was told that one of my sentences had some repetition, so we worked to fix that. The peer revision process is always helpful to me because I need someone with a different perspective to read it. I can then know if it flows and if my information makes sense and supports my thesis statement. I may also sometimes misspell words or even leave words out and other people will be able to spot it while I may be not.

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